After messing around with typo and vectors for about 6 hours, I decided to just let this one be. I personally think they would only take away from the overall composition.
I've seen you do many things and they've all been really good. This one lacks a general focal point, the flow is there, but it's lost without something or someplace for your eyes to rest. Based on your other submissions I'd say that this wasn't your finest hour, but it's not totally lost. I'm sure something can come of this as it's real decent as it is, but lacking a focal point, or a place of rest I can't help but to wonder if you just got tired.
I agree with flummox, this needs a focal point and a little bit of typography may have actually helped this piece...also, change the material on the top part of the render, it's too bright, the bottom part of this piece kicks, i love the reflections although I think that the bg on the bottom part needs a little bit of work, to me it seems that the colors don't fit. Still, great piece man keep at the 3d haha
since I´m a 2D artist I have no idea what most ppl here are talking about, looks great to me, coloring and lighting along with the nice reflection is great
Keep up the good work
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since i'm not even a digital artist i have no idea what any of them are talking about (hehe.. i dont think i want to all that much either.. snorecore ) but i think this is great.. the colour and reflections are just insane and compositionally it works too.. like how it starts off almost stark white.. builds up in intensity and detail and then gets darker towards the bottom. awesome work i wouldnt want to see any typography on this
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